Lol... composition was always my strong point, although I always leaned toward the succinct. I can appreciate your dialogue.
If it was my scene, I would have smoked him by whatever means was necessary before the ticket writers and xerox police got there.
Off course you would
Yep, the Lt thinks all us regular folk deserve to die, as long as the power of the badge is preserved. He's proven that time and time again. Fuqk you peasants.
