you surely possess significant talent/ability for writing about your adventures--in effect, "painting with words"...
any person who can generate 32,000 views in 15 days has really accomplished something of significance here.
i did enjoy the way you set forth your descriptive chronological narrative in the story. (i often responded to annabel's method of utilizing "in medias res", though sometimes he went too far by using it more than once in a story...)
a job very well done--keep on "treading that path"...
all learning is like a funnel: however, contrary to popular thought, one begins with the the narrow end. the more you progress, the more it expands into greater discovery--and the less of an audience you will have...
