Originally Posted by Akbob5
They're not a stoned out Hollywood queered-up play write that could dream this schitt up.

It smelled fishy right off the bat, but wreaked like a landfill within a couple of pages.

I'm truly sorry to hear of the loss of life of a loved one.

This guy reminds me of one of my former AF commander who claimed to have "thousands of hours of SIMULATED combat experience" and numerous other claims to fame. It was always about him...WTF, over?


As they say, the difference between writing fiction and truth is that fiction has to be somewhat believable.

"Dear Lord, save me from Your followers"